 Maffmatix
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Date: December 24, 2004 @ 8:33 PM
Nice dark beat by Illa. Yur lyrics were nice and dark and the flow rolled thru pretty well aside from some parts where it needed some pollish. I like the screaming in the chorus. "Cock the barrel to my temple, and fill my head with iron"
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Maffmatix
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Date: December 24, 2004 @ 8:33 PM
Yea your second verse is fire.
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Nitemair
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Date: December 24, 2004 @ 9:01 PM
shit's nice duke. in all honesty the flow could be a little better, but yo, def doesn't take away from the track, cause shit is tight, so please don't take my thoughts on this the wrong way, stay up duke, 1!
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Nitemair
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Date: December 24, 2004 @ 9:02 PM
aiight listenin to the 2nd verse, and def agree wit maff, shit is betta than the 1st one. flows betta, now that's what i'm talkin bout in my first comment, good shit, 1! and illa, def tight beat, feelin it a lot.
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 zique
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Date: December 24, 2004 @ 10:53 PM
nod can hear you are about to LOCK-IN and NAIL-DOWN your sound and set into your groove!!!Sounds like u have stepped up your your whole game on this one.You sound confident and in command.Your work gets better and better and its always been...tight!!!  No lookin back now!
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 tsand19151
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Date: December 25, 2004 @ 1:17 AM
kick-ass track...
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k-smoove
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Date: December 25, 2004 @ 12:17 PM
Thanks ya'll, glad u feelin wat I did here & zique u gotta point my man there's more to this, believe me 
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redazn19
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Date: December 25, 2004 @ 6:23 PM
hey nice track guy, I like the begining's beat like a river flowin or something. The flow was nice, I like ya style of rhymin cuz u mixin a couplof quicks attacks. It hits hard everytime. thumbs up
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redazn19
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Date: December 25, 2004 @ 10:43 PM
Oh yeah, Merry Christmas =D
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trillcitypoet
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Date: December 26, 2004 @ 5:31 PM
mos def a deep track...i dig this.
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 0Hz
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Date: December 28, 2004 @ 11:43 AM
Yeah. Real deep, K-smoove you have definatley stepped up ya game, ya felt the beat and flowed with it. very good work.
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 AdamsGod
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Date: December 28, 2004 @ 1:07 PM
good intro, nice and dark..
vocals are great.. right in my face!
beats own!
love it.
great chorus.
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TopDollar
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Date: December 30, 2004 @ 2:57 PM
Gave you a thumbs up, great track. BTW, I will no longer be on DMusic. I am not sure if that is a permanent decision.
You have my screen name though, so contact me there in the future and we can collab on some tracks.
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Rodrica
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Date: December 31, 2004 @ 10:04 AM
 Love that intro...got me hooked to it straight away Nice and dark great atmosphere! Lyrics are fantastic!! Top class stuff...great track! 
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Chu-Deezy
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Date: January 2, 2005 @ 11:22 PM
wassup mayne. feelin' this shit mayne.
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kLash
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Date: January 4, 2005 @ 2:24 PM
30seconds into it, and you couldnt kill me to turn it off. Id bust all 6 shottie slugs if you even hit pause. maaaddd looveee !!! :nods head: :clicks download:  ends to 4 others: love'n it dun. get at me for collab!!!!!!!!!
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kLash
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Date: January 4, 2005 @ 2:32 PM
" dont fuck'n tell me, you can understand, when you'v never swallowed, ah bottle of asprinas, with alcohol my man, 500....millagrams ah pop..on ah empty stomach! feel your hear thump, wit a head rush, have you come'n back.. frooom it!! " -k-smoove-
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cosmicearthgirl
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Date: January 5, 2005 @ 12:32 AM
The feel of this is so smooth, and the dark lyrics go perfectly with the subtle music.  those samples in the background.
Really well done!
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 AppleJuice
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Date: January 6, 2005 @ 4:43 AM
Wow, this is really cool. Lyrics flow really smoothly and have a lot of depth of emotion. Sound fxs during that break bring out a lot of feeling in the lyrics especially. This is an excellent piece of art. You should definately be happy with it. Keep it up dude!
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 independentm...
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Date: January 7, 2005 @ 12:48 AM
Enjoy the dark beat and the mix! It's "smoove" lyrically to boot! (And, the words scare the hell outta me!)
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Vickxxx
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Date: January 8, 2005 @ 11:40 PM
good stuff bro....lyrics are awesome...that chorus is killer.....nice flow thru this track.
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soundsseeker
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Date: January 13, 2005 @ 10:35 AM
grrr.. buffering is messin this thang up..
now thats better...
  love that single piano note thru-out.. gives it a sinister ..life is still waiting.. feeling 
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Amp
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Date: January 13, 2005 @ 12:44 PM
delivery is good homie  ....second verse is str8  !....keep the shit coming!
~1~
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T-Boi
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Date: January 17, 2005 @ 2:01 AM
Wow kick ass!!
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TransAutobot
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Date: February 21, 2005 @ 7:17 PM
I know this beat well, Illachild indeed  This is pretty hot The vocals complimented the beat and vice vica. Good vocal presence. The flow could of been better at some parts but overall, I liked it The part where you yelled, or could of been downloaded vocals I dunno but, you should of lowered the volume on that, then put some reverb on to it and an echo effect. That would of definitely have been hot Great stuff
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moam
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Date: February 28, 2005 @ 5:22 PM
Very cool I love the beat here, kind of bouncy  Great flow  Sounds pretty dark too which is right up my alley  Very cool track
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gothian
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Date: May 13, 2005 @ 5:42 PM
You are right rap is not my field, but if I were a raper, I would listen to stuff like this... dark and evil. The piano gives a special vibe to the whole track.
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 TDUBB
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Date: August 6, 2005 @ 7:43 PM
that beat is hot
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AgentMGD
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Date: August 26, 2005 @ 6:17 PM
very dark and haunting song(with the piano playing in the background giving off that eeriness which i like very much) - like the lyrics and your flow
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MicDog
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Date: August 27, 2005 @ 2:09 PM
ill shit mayne! feel'n this 1. you tell the story well!
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jd2theog
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Date: October 7, 2005 @ 4:17 AM
The beat is hott..
Tight lyrics..Hooh is dope..I like all the stuff in this..Good work homie
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TDUBB
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Date: October 7, 2005 @ 12:09 PM
another hot song
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zedsalt
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Date: December 19, 2005 @ 3:24 PM
The intro reminded me...more than a little...of Tricky. The lyric is deeper than a new moon on a starless night, overflowing with meaning for anyone who has ever heard the voice of "the Judas in [their] veins".
And who hasn't?
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 xxbabiegurlxx
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Date: January 4, 2006 @ 6:04 PM
DAYUMMMMM THIS IS HAWT!!!!!
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xxbabiegurlxx
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Date: January 4, 2006 @ 6:05 PM
keep doin wat chu doin!!!!
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CheckMark
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Date: April 8, 2006 @ 2:01 PM
Dayumm..Dis Is A Whole New Style..Neva Heard of Dis Befo..Im Likin it Mayn..you gotcha own style of rhymin n errthin..dis is a hot song..kinda creepy tho n'amean? but im diggin it!! its hott mayn...nice flow..and i luved tha beat! Keep it upp Mayn~
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fastlyrics
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Date: May 20, 2006 @ 11:02 AM
dayumm im feelin that gangsta beat
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thaX
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Date: May 24, 2006 @ 12:43 AM
LOLX. cool!!!! chck out my stuff! i like ur flow on this one!
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DeadraveN
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Date: May 31, 2006 @ 12:33 PM
Nice smooth track.. awesome beat and instrumental track, .. great dark lyrics, and solid delivery.. your voice clips a bit at times, it might be recorded a bit to hot or something, but all in all this is a very cool track, dark and deep, just how I like'em.
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